Feedback on My Sales Copy

[RichB]

I had a problem with my site earlier that I fixed.
I've had very bad sales and was hoping to get some feedback on my sales copy. I'd appreciate it.
Is my niche too small perhaps?

My Muse Site

Rich

[Marcie]

hmmmm now that I look more closely, I am not sure what to do as a potential customer - is the only way to join via the navigation on the left? Maybe create some "join now" buttons and put them in your copy, maybe right before "read more" and again at the bottom, and highlight your money back guarantee more, and maybe even make a link so they can read the "guarantee" - make them feel safe. Sounds like you are getting traffic, just need to convert yout visitors! Keep trying!

[RichB]

good ideas.
I had a big image about the guarantee, but got a lot of feedback that it looked too "sales" and turned people off so I removed it. I'll call it out in bold or something.

[alexandra]

I'm still getting the VirusScan alert. Did you ever figure out what that is? I know a few people mentioned it in your first thread. Perhaps this is affecting your site as well. I'm using McAfee Enterprise 8.0

[RichB]

Man, I'm sorry. Can you tell me what it said it was exactly and maybe send me a screen shot to rich@trimuscle.com? I can't get it to happen on any computer I try so it's very difficult to diagnosis without knowing what it is.

[alexandra]

Originally Posted by RichB

Man, I'm sorry. Can you tell me what it said it was exactly and maybe send me a screen shot to rich@trimuscle.com? I can't get it to happen on any computer I try so it's very difficult to diagnosis without knowing what it is.

I just sent you a screen shot.