Website Review sifusergio.com

[Furgill]

Hi All,

Please Feedback our website we made some changes
www.sifusergio.com

[networkmemetics]

Banner to Large - Takes up too much space above the fold.

Red headline isn't too exciting to me....

The pictures of you in white, in the white room, on the white couch, look like a cross between Zoolander and Bruno. In my opinion they are very cheesy and do nothing to show you as a serious martial artist.

Put your email sign up box next to your email offer.

[indieviewTV]

The pictures of you in white, in the white room, on the white couch, look like a cross between Zoolander and Bruno. In my opinion they are very cheesy and do nothing to show you as a serious martial artist.

HAHAHAH i was thinking the EXACT SAME THING! i spotted out that picture immediately. hahahah zoolander and bruno is perfect.

anyway. it looks like you spent a lot of time and worked hard on the website. but it also looks like you rushed it. there is bad grammar all over the place. the images have messed up aspect ratios.

in other words, when i look at the site, i think, "scam."

a site has to be close to PERFECT in order for me to want to give money to them. i will never give money to a place that i don't 100% trust that i will receive more than my money's worth.

hire a web guy. tell him you want a "web 2.0" site.

[officer_dibble]

One minor thing - the title tag is currently reading "DVD's". This won't do you any favours in search engines so make it more descriptive/relevant to your business/keywords you want to rank well for.

Also I concur with the others. It reminded me of the graphic style and layout of my dad's 1980s martial arts magazines. That said - it may be what's required for this niche. Perhaps looking too modern wouldn't fit well with this audience (no excuse for typos and grammar though).

Your testimonials are excellent - perhaps feature these more widely?

[Carlos]

you need to do a spelling and grammar check, you have TONS of run on sentences and spelling mistakes. Example:

My international association and alliance are some of the most successful in the martial arts world with even my instructors and representatives in different countries giving seminars that surpass the magic 100 number.

Should be:

My international association and alliance are some of the most successful in the martial arts world. I have over 100 instructors and representatives giving seminars all over the world.

"My daily emails draw custumors from over 20 countries."

should be:

My daily emails draw customers from over 20 countries.

I'm guessing English isn't your first language. Get someone with a good english base to go over your entire website with you and make the necessary changes.

[ItsuNaneo79]

Hi All,

Please Feedback our website we made some changes
www.sifusergio.com


Hey,

Banner is too big.

You need a better headline in red.

Also, see if you can increase your font size on the main text...kinda hard to read.

Oh, and as someone else said, your page displays as "dvd" Get a web douche to fix that.

Looks like good products tho!

[jmawbey]

Looks great! I won't change anything for now and see how it works. Within in a few minutes I was able to tell you are the real deal.

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[indieviewTV]

Looks like there's been some improvements. Grammar is still a big thing though.

[Bateman, P.]

The Bruno comment ruined it for me. That's all I see now.

[dwculver]

I think you have a great offer and site. You are appealing to real fanatics and folks really want to know things. I agree a proof reading would be good. Also your FREE TIP just for signing in perhaps get lost... you might create urgency to ACT by a special space for that offer.. good luck

[mastererrob]

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