Final critique before go live

[skinut]

All,
It has been about 3 weeks since I last posted my site on this forum and I have made many of the changes that were suggested. I have added a call to action (the spring sale-20% off for first 25 customers), highlighted important points, re-worded and changed fonts for the headings, and generally cleaned up the site.

It was recommended that I put a youtube video of my elevator pitch on the site but I have held off on that just to see if my current format is adequate to go live.

So please critique my site one more time. I am specifically interested in:

1) Do I need a youtube video of my elevator pitch?
2) Are the headings bold enough and do they grab your attention?
3) Is the call to action(the spring sale) visible and urgent enough to force action from customers?
4) Is the yellow highlighting to bold and over the top? Do you have any suggestions instead of yellow highlighting?


Thanks everyone! I'm so close and just can't wait to go live!

Kinner

www.EnduranceRunnerInterviews.com

[Matthew Connors]

This looks much better then V1 a few weeks ago. Use of colours and headings will convert well.

Consider having 2-3 landing pages with only 1 thing different on each and send 100 PPC clicks to each to test conversion. eg with the price and without the price

or with two seperate prices

Do that for the first 1000 or so clicks and ou will heve a great handle on whats workign and whats not.

But hey it looks great. Well done