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[jackson]

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[Keep a Movin' Dan]

The unformatted copy is of course disorienting, it may work better once your web designer is finished with the site. But two criticisms:

(1) The initial paragraph is strong, but it's ambiguous as to the purpose of the guide. It gives the impression that it might contain information on use, and the fact that this is basically a shopping guide may feel like a bit of a let down.

(2) You have to think about how you're justifying the price tag. I know nothing about cameras, and maybe you can assume that your target audience will know these things, but I assume we're talking about very exensive cameras, ones that cost thousands of dollars, yes? If so, I'd emphasize this, something like "Before you spend blah blah blah... Secrets for getting the capabilities you need without overspending."

[specmurt]

You have only one item to sell. Why do you use PayPal shopping cart? It is one extra step for you customer.

[jackson]

Thanks this is fantastic advice, I appreciate it!

Yes they are expensive cameras, thanks that's a good point to justify the price.

The unformatted copy is of course disorienting, it may work better once your web designer is finished with the site. But two criticisms:

(1) The initial paragraph is strong, but it's ambiguous as to the purpose of the guide. It gives the impression that it might contain information on use, and the fact that this is basically a shopping guide may feel like a bit of a let down.

(2) You have to think about how you're justifying the price tag. I know nothing about cameras, and maybe you can assume that your target audience will know these things, but I assume we're talking about very exensive cameras, ones that cost thousands of dollars, yes? If so, I'd emphasize this, something like "Before you spend blah blah blah... Secrets for getting the capabilities you need without overspending."