Critique On My New Site Please?

[MBatcho1]

Hello All,

I have not been on for a while and just thought of everyone when considering people critiquing my new site. I sell self defense products and will be adding more very soon. My links are coming along well and I will have some sales soon.

The site is http://www.peopleprotection.com

Check it out and let me know what you think.

Thank you and I hope everyone has a good holiday season.

[ilrein]

Plain and to the point. For a no nonsense product like self defense items, it's a solid approach.

Out of curiosity, what's your story? I only read Tim's book yesterday, and I'm interested in how much success others have accomplished. I'm basically wondering about your why/what/where/when/how.

[darkness47]

Missing a phone number!

[captaink]

I like the introductory texts, but images?

Seriously, if you want (and you do want) to be found by Search Engines, make that text.

::captaink::

[Dantplayer]

Looks very good. To the point.

What's the 17% really signify?

Just curious, is that a picture of the actual product?

[MBatcho1]

I do know about the phone number so thank you for that. Taking things one at a time.

The 17% is the amount of active ingredient in each pepper spray. So far the highest amount on the market.

I'm not sure what you mean by the text and the images. Not sure if you know this but there is a formula for the amount of text you should have on a page reletive to your header/navi/footer. I will take it into account though if you can explain.

Thank you everyone.