My Muse is Ready to Test

[rmshus]

:D I started reading Tim's book about a year ago. I took it with me on a vacation to Belize and read it again while lounging on a beautiful beach in Placencia. MyParadiseBeachGift is the result of combining The 4-Hour Workweek and that vacation.

I am entering the "testing the muse" phase and welcome your input. Feel free to choose a beach name and enter your name and e-mail to help me troubleshoot my system. (You will get {hopefully} one follow-up e-mail that says, "The Paradise Beach Gift Kit is not quite ready to...")

I welcome your suggestions and input.

Thanks,

Ron

www.MyParadiseBeachGift.com

[froldt]

So is the only difference between the three packages the format that the certificate comes in? If so, you might want to differentiate the packages a bit more. I know that, personally, I would only buy the instant gift, as I could print it out on high-quality paper for free (already have the paper) and frame it for cheaper than the difference.

edit: figured out what I was buying when I read through the questions.

Under the questions, you might want to add "back" to the end of the first sentence in the guarantee paragraph. "We will deliver everything shown, as promised or you will get 110% of your money back."

You mention the Amazing Beaches of the World Registry a couple of times. Since this is something that you are offering as a private thing, you might want to make it more available. Throw up a website that is the Registry, with a "Join the Registry" type of button that returns to the sales page. It could be considered a page of testimonials.

[rmshus]

Froldt,

Thanks for yur input. Great idea about creating a website for the registry. I'm glad that the question section helped to clarify. I actually think that the "instant gift" will be our most profitable item. Does $19.95 seem like a good price? Thanks also for the editing detail.

Ron